Plumtree

Christian - well done for posting the digipak and poster but I was expecting to see the latest draft of the video as well. Please make sure this is added as a matter of urgency so that we can see the progress from the first cut and look at anything else that might need amending.

Positives: 

• There is good continuity between the four panels on your digipak and your use of the images.
• Good colour co-ordination to the poster from the digipak
• The text on the poster wraps around the image effectively

Improvements:

•  The image on the poster looks completely different to all the images on the digipak and this affects the continuity as to the identity of your artist. It is more detailed in its drawing where the smaller images are that much less defined.
• The interior panel that has the track listing needs to be different. Maybe have a list of people to thank, a song lyric, band members...
• The back panel needs a bar code and maybe the record company logo.
• They all look a bit 2D and lacking in depth. You could try adding some shading to the text to help with this.